Category: Writing Tools - Mala Naidoo’s Book World

The First Page Drawcard – Part 1

Novel or short-story, poetry or playscript— they begin with a blank page and courage to believe that you have something worthy to share.

The burning question on a first attempt at writing a story is—how do you begin?

The opening of your novel is your invitation to the reader. It holds a promise of what’s to come. When given deep thought, and crafted well, it can capture attention, set tone, and ignite curiosity before the reader even turns the page.

What are the ways to start your novel with confidence and creativity?

Hold Your Reader’s Attention Immediately

The first paragraph is your moment to grab attention. Make the reader want to know more.

A strong opening line can create intrigue, emotion, or atmosphere in just a few words. Think of George Orwell’s Nineteen Eighty-Four:

It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen.

Curiosity is sparked by the suggestion of something impossible in the tone of abnormality in this world.

One of the ways to create an effective opening to a novel is to ask: What feeling do I want my reader to have within the first few sentences? Then work with whatever ignites your imagination, craft an image, immerse yourself in the opening lines and write whatever comes to mind. Remember, it all begins with one word after another after another as all great novels begin.

Conflict or Curiosity

Curiosity is peaked when the reader wants the answer to a question. Inner conflict can be emotional, moral, or even unspoken, or external — it does not have to be a shoot-out on an urban street, it could be an observation of a situation, or an overheard conversation.

Draw the reader in on what’s at stake—invest in the readers emotions, make them care. Ask yourself/your muse, what does your protagonist want? What threatens that desire? A small hint of tension can pull readers in.

Who’s telling the Story? Make Your Character’s Voice Shine

The best openings don’t just show what’s happening — they reveal who’s telling the story.

A distinctive voice can turn an ordinary moment into something unforgettable. Consider Holden Caulfield’s sardonic tone in The Catcher in the Rye, or Elizabeth Bennet’s sharp wit in Pride and Prejudice. Their personalities come alive instantly.

If your reader connects with your character’s voice, they will be hooked even though nothing much has happened yet.

Ground the Reader in Setting and Mood

Make your reader feel where they are. Invite readers into your world with just enough description to draw them into the landscape you create.

A few vivid, specific details can convey an effective atmosphere. In To Kill a Mockingbird, Harper Lee uses the sleepy, sun-soaked town of Maycomb to foreshadow the slow, simmering tension of her story.

Ponder on: What your setting says about the mood or theme of your novel?

Start Where the Story Truly Begins

Begin the story at the moment of change in your character’s life— when something new, strange, or difficult begins. Hold back on a lot of background before the plot really begins.

Make a Promise to Your Reader

Your reader should have a clear sense of what kind of story they’re reading. Genre matters: Is it a love story? A thriller? A literary exploration of identity?

Sustain tone, pace, and style as they send signals about what to expect. If your opening is dark and brooding, readers won’t expect a lighthearted comedy — and vice versa.

Your first pages are a sort of contract with your reader, promising a certain kind of experience.

Note: The First Draft’s Beginning Isn’t Final

The opening lines in your first draft probably won’t be the one your readers see, or you might just strike that brilliant note in your first attempt.

Sometimes the perfect opening scene is hiding somewhere in the second or third chapters.

Get words down. You can refine later as writers do, as you must do — perfection begins with imperfection—it gets better as you walk the way, one step at a time.

Pitfalls You Might Want to Avoid

Starting with the weather (unless it directly ties to character /motif/theme in your story)
Dream sequences that confuse more than they intrigue.
Info-dumps — long paragraphs of backstory before the readers are vested in the characters.
Too many names at once, which can overwhelm your reader.

Use the KIS method (Keep it Simple) by aiming for clarity, connection, and curiosity.

Here are a Few Prompts to Jump-Start Your Opening

Start in the middle of an argument.
Open with something ordinary described as if it’s terrifying.
Begin at the exact moment your protagonist makes a life-changing decision
Begin with a lie your main character tells.

An idea triggered from one of the above prompts could grow into your perfect first scene.

The Only Wrong Way Is Never Starting

Every writer faces the same fear at the beginning—that imposter syndrome feeling that what they write won’t be good enough. Remember: you can’t improve a blank page.

Start somewhere. Trust that your story will reveal its best beginning once you’ve written your way into it.

Now, take a deep breath, open your journal or laptop and begin your novel.

Your story deserves to be told — and only you can tell it with authenticity.

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Fiction – AI or the Human Touch

Whether we accept it, remain neutral, or deny it, it’s here!

When it comes to creativity, the writing of fiction–how do you balance AI and the human touch?

Ernest Hemingway said, There’s nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at the typewriter and bleed. If this is so, why is AI necessary when the writing process is innately, humanely natural?

For centuries, storytelling has been a cultural tradition in every corner of the world. Who is the best at sharing their personal experiences through storytelling?

Is it possible for AI to display raw emotions?

Some argue that it’s authentic, while others contend that it’s programmed and thus not genuine.

The subjectivity of creativity begs the question: can it be programmed?

The dilemma is that some mask truths to create a fake identity. The theme of appearance vs reality in Shakespeare’s plays exposes how easily humans can be deceived. Will AI be yet another mask for machine-generated creativity? Who receives credit for the positive reception of AI-generated work? Another door to truth and ethics is unlocked.

Be curious and informed before leaping.

Artists create. They can express themselves through art in a multitude of ways — painting, writing, music, fashion, architecture, machinery, transportation, and beyond.

Charles Dickens, Jane Austen, Leonardo da Vinci, Picasso, Mozart, and other masters of their crafts possessed scintillating minds and remarkable imaginations before AI.

How does AI affect the human brain and heart when it takes over our inherent rights to uniqueness, growth, and creativity? When AI ‘generates’ creativity, do artists’ voices and works lose their uniqueness that only the human touch can produce?

The books and authors that writers admire, inspire them. Their mentors, past and present, guide them in honing their skills and style to create unique storylines. Imagination and voice make up a writer’s unique human fingerprint. It captures the reader’s attention. Have we reached a technological level where AI can imitate a writer’s style and imagination?

Imagination is the beginning of creation. You imagine what you desire, you will what you imagine, and at last, you create what you will. – George Bernard Shaw

AI is a part of our daily lives, but we often overlook it. Bots have butted into our lives before we had a name for them. Just whisper ‘Hey Google,’ or ‘Alexa’ and they are ready to provide us with the answers we seek. Does this make the human mind lazy if we don’t physically do the research?

The uniqueness of a writer’s voice lies in the manner in which they tell the story. AI can mimic the tone and intonation of the human voice, but can it replicate the character and personality of the human soul to articulate life experiences?

Creativity is seeing what others see and thinking what no one else ever thought. – Albert Einstein.

As an artist, you live your passion, share your talents and skills, and develop with every piece of art created.

The ways and reasons for entering this brave new world of creativity are widely debated.

The worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt — Sylvia Plath

Be curious and cautious to guide your choices in a rapidly evolving creative sphere. What’s your choice?

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Creative Process – Longhand

Writing with a pen or pencil in hand has the natural rhythm of heart, mind, and soul, working in sync.

When creative thought emerges, there is no schedule. It arrives on the wings of Mother Muse who transports the message for the composer to pick up.

Longhand novel drafting and writing has been my process from the middle of my third book. I tested the shift to handwriting, and the creative process flowed with ease and gained momentum sooner on story advancement. While this is positive for creative flow, additionally time has to be built into the deadline to type up the longhand manuscript. Essentially this is like a second draft if writing entirely in longhand, then type on Word or other preferred platforms. There are pros and cons to the process. The toll on the wrist for one — writer’s occupational health matters. The positive side is that before the first full self-edit, the dried leaves, dead wood bits and pieces are swept away as the typed word hits the digital page.

How do we maximise the pros to meet deadlines, and create a polished piece? Dictating from longhand onto Word is a great way to save the old wrist issues. This takes time and will be near accurate when voice recognition is on the mark, or there will be more to clear up than just the longhand manuscript flaws.

Scrivener dictation is great across all devices and allows easy transition to a Word document. There are countless other ways to dictate the handwritten word to the digital format.

The brain engages differently when handwriting, compared to keyboard writing. Memory is enhanced with handwriting, a great way to keep track of sequence, characters, scenes etc in their contribution to the whole novel/story. Memory alone will not suffice to keep track of such, note making and journaling are an important part of the process. Scrivener helps the digital tracking of all the parts that make up the sum.

Handwriting, according to psychological studies, is therapeutic for coping with trauma, and to process emotions — the physical formation of letters to words to sentences to paragraphs is undistracted with handwriting, it settles the mind and spirit. This has the benefit of capturing emotional scenes in novels with authenticity to enhance reader engagement.

… handwriting like playing a guitar or preferred musical instrument, it is thoughtful and mindful.

In an era where speed is the demand (a mixed blessing) anxiety levels have increased across all generations. Handwriting is akin to playing a musical instrument, think of the strokes on a guitar to produce the sweet melody. Notice the musician’s facial expression, lost in moments of pleasure. Handwriting is markedly slower than tapping a keyboard, and thus intensely calming. The very act of handwriting like playing a guitar or preferred musical instrument, makes the process thoughtful and mindful.

As a teacher and writer, spelling benefits from handwriting without spellcheck, free of predicted text that can at times mumbo jumbo intention/meaning.

If you’re a digital only writer and need a conversion test, start small.

Write out your daily or weekly home or work plan on a bedside or desk notebook.

Poets don’t draw. They unravel their handwriting, and then tie it up again, but differently~ Jean Cocteau (French poet, playwright, novelist, designer, filmmaker)

Now sit back and watch your creativity grow!

Happy handwriting. Let it flow!

What’s your best writing practice?

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Fine Art or Brutal Chop

As I work through cleaning up my latest manuscript, a first in series, I am weeding out those darling crutch words, scene shifts, and other hidden gems (I thought they were gems until I read them with an unemotional, critical eye) to clear the wood for the trees to have a better view of where my characters are and what they’re getting up to. If I don’t have a clear, error free, sense of my story, how will the editor? Worse still what would the reader do?

It’s not easy after several self-edits to handover your baby for professional scrutiny. There’s no getting away from it, self-editing is turning the eye inward without a tear, first the incision then as you pass judgement, the brutal chop of your precious, crafted words, emotions, descriptions, settings, characters, and whatever else might need adjusting in your created world.

very, really, rather, quite, in fact… do you need them?

So, how many steps are there during the self-editing phase? (These are the steps I follow which varies from writer to writer)

First, line by line, chapter by chapter, on the computer screen change the double word use, missing words, etc.
The second step is to correct timelines if there are errors.
During the third phase, put the manuscript through editing software such as Grammarly, and Pro-Writing Aid — excellent to pick up flaws the naked eye missed — spelling (American or British?), grammar, repetitions, and general style especially when that sneaky passive voice creeps in.
The fourth step is reading your manuscript out aloud and recording the story for playback editing. Rhythm, the cadence, and sense become distinct during this process which directs you back to the screen to fix those snags.
The fifth phase is print a hard copy of the manuscript and rip though it with the colours of the rainbow to show you what is working, and what needs another chop or perhaps another trim.
The sixth phase is formatting an eBook in Scrivener to read through in a different form — anything that slipped through the self-editing cracks screams out, in a new form, for rectification.

Now the manuscript is ready for the professional edit although I might enlist a trusted, closely held, proof-reader to check through once before the professional submission. Then proofreaders step in for the final check.

During the process of self-editing do not rely solely on your gut experience in making changes. Consult those in the industry that you admire, read or use as a role-model . An editing guidebook, and a thesaurus is a must have on any good writer’s desk.

When working with an editor, it should be a negotiation on necessary changes, but be prepared that there could be changes suggested that might not sit too well with you, but for the success of the book, within reason, you should take the suggestions on board.

What is the editing timeframe?

There are many ways to do this , some say spend three months drafting, three months editing. However, some write a book a month — at best I could get through two to three in a year as a part-time writer. Remember, the professional editor could ask for a month to check your manuscript.

I generally veer to three months writing, three months editing, but sometimes life makes its call on time and energy so that varies year to year, book by book.

What are your self-editing tips? Let us know how you do it your way.

Collaborate + Consider + Cooperate + Change = an excellent MS ready to go.

Best wishes with writing, editing, and publishing.

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Editing Tips

The End! A joyous moment in finishing a novel after many months or years of getting up at the crack of dawn or staying up late into the night, writing the story that has burned within, but, it is only finished after the professional edit.

A product in hand created from the imagination in a fictional story is a proud moment. Now the editing process looms. No book ever goes out into the world without this step or rather several takes of this step.

I’ll share a few pointers that might be what you’re looking for, or perhaps you have another way of approaching the first round of editing.

Let the manuscript sit for a week before you look at it. Some say leave it for a longer period, perhaps six weeks before revisiting the composition with new eyes. Whatever works for you, ensure you have somewhat removed yourself from the emotional hooks of the work – this break allows the gaps, errors and omissions to come to light.

Print out the draft and run through the hard copy with several sharpened pencils, an eraser, and highlighter while correcting or adding in notes for a reconsideration of scenes etc. Scanning through a few chapters a day, when most energetic and lucid, perhaps over a two-week period, is an initial step towards removing redundancies, adding in omissions and checking spelling and other inconsistencies that arose during the feverish days of writing.

The second step is to read the draft out loud and record the reading. This highlights the flow or lack of it in dialogue and the unfolding of the story arc. This is followed by revisiting what needs to be rectified on pace, plot and character. Often at this stage, while characters might be developed, plot holes might be discovered.

After this is cleaned up, I usually format the draft as an Ebook and copy it to Kindle or iBooks and read it again on my device. Things that were missed in the last round of checks, pop in this new format and so the next round of corrections begin. This takes two rounds of Ebook checks. Reading chapters backwards has the benefit of noting errors that slip past the eye, as the mind sees and reads what is not there when following the sequence and ‘sense’ of the story.

Then a proof-reader is engaged for what the emotionally-hooked eye might have missed during the abovementioned process. All this occurs before the professional edit – a positive step towards getting advanced feedback on what could be improved upon to make the story sing. Ultimately, it’s up to the writer in what is accepted or rejected as plot, pace or character change.

Let the manuscript rest before revisiting it with ‘new eyes’

Some suggested pointers on key areas to work through during the self-editing of a manuscript.

Astound the Reader

Think about what intrigue is set up. How will the reader be surprised by an event or situation? Will there be a sudden revelation that the reader did not anticipate? The trick is to keep the reader turning every page in expectation of the next scene. Astounding the reader improves with each book written. The imagination is like a muscle, once taken to uncharted waters, it grows and develops. How is this achieved? ‘Read, read, read,’ the works of other successful writers, or be curious by turning to non-fiction books on the craft of writing. Become a life-long student of the craft.

Cut-out excess

In this fast-paced existence we lead, being superfluous kills the reader’s interest. In composing the first draft, write as much as possible – get all the ideas down in whatever fashion they emerge but be prepared to cull a lot during the editing phase.

Become a surgeon or a skilled chef of words, cutting away the disease or layers of fat that serve no purpose other than to make the story sluggish. This is referred to as ‘killing your darlings’ – the crutch words that we depend on are the unconscious gremlins that creep in.

Try not to include a back-story or contextual details that serve no purpose to the story – this is info-dumping that fills white space on the page to no effect in engaging the reader. Here, reading the manuscript out loud assists with discerning where the info-dump might be sitting with unnecessary details that steal from creating a more in-depth representation of an idea/character. Don’t give it all away too soon.

Make the Prose Sing

Style – choice of language and the general flow of the narration is an ongoing development of the writer’s craft that is enhanced with every piece written. The reader wants to see, feel, and be moved by the story. The use of metaphors, symbolism, imagery etc – bring music to the language of the story. This is what it means to ‘show, don’t tell.’

Additionally, look at how chapters end, are they leaving the reader with something that makes it difficult to put the book down? Keep it subtle and suggestive leaving the reader craving for more.

‘… emotional rawness in unadorned simplicity’ is indicative that the prose is appreciated for the meaning created, as is, ‘another engaging and addictive tale…’ Read your work as a reader, to feel, find, enjoy and connect to the story, then go back to the drawing board if something is not ‘singing,’ to polish the prose for a timeless read.

Create Characters with Emotional Depth

‘No tears in the writer,

No tears in the reader,

No surprise for the writer,

No surprise for the reader.

~ Robert Frost

If a writer does not feel it, how will the reader feel it? Invite the reader into the character’s head- what do they think, feel, see, and believe? How do they demonstrate this through their words, deeds and actions? Reading a review that states, ‘…brought tears to my eyes…’ is an indication that emotional triggers achieved the desired effect. Hearing a reader say, ‘I want a character like that in my life…’ signifies that a character has the effective emotional depth to elicit such a reader response. Reader reactions in, ‘… the characters had depth and charm…’ reveals a connection with the reader.

Creating believable characters with everyday concerns allows the reader to step into a character’s life to experience their foibles, vulnerabilities, strengths and challenges.

What are your thoughts on editing the first draft before the professional edit?

Please add your comments in the box below to share your views.

Happy Writing, Careful Editing, Enjoyable Reading!

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The First Draft

When a story takes hold, leaving you sleepless, daydreaming… the first words trickle in, you write them, and you can’t stop going back, creeping back to your laptop or journal to write a bit more. When the writing bug bites, it’s there to stay, calling you wherever you are.
There’s an excitement, a thrill, the adventure behind closed doors… just you and your characters. With each line, you get to know more about them, then it’s almost as though the characters lead you into their stories.

The first draft is an exhilarating experience even if you have written a few books. You can’t stop thinking about it, you wake up at 3 a.m. with a jolt of inspiration, and if you don’t write it down, it’s gone… I have had a few lost… gone… but a 3 a.m. journal, a gift from my daughter, is safely ensconced on my bedside table, close to my reading lamp, capturing the late night unexpected bouts of inspiration that intrude upon restless sleep – not even a blaring alarm clock can do this on any good day!

Starting out

Starting out as a writer, I had two stories competing for attention. Thinking that this might be the one book I will write, I merged the stories, hooked them as plot and subplot. Across Time and Space pulled and tugged at intrigue, unexpected encounters, crime, romance and human rights issues.

Discovery

From that first draft of my first book to the first draft of my fourth book (locked in editing as we speak), my process has morphed along the way. While being between a plotter and pantser, I moved from laptop screen drafting to handwriting some chapters in a journal.

This sped up the drafting time, I was writing by hand with speed, more naturally than the words that filled my little laptop screen as I tapped my way forward. I then started writing in my little journal, my second arm, traveling with me wherever I went. No backspacing, just scratch and keep going… forward… ideas gushed, building up at a faster pace.

The benefit

Having a chapter crafted by hand gave me so much more to work from and editing, stage 1 began as I typed up the manuscript. I noticed the difference from those chapters that went from head to screen from a basic ‘pantser plan’ to those chapters that were handwritten – less cleaning up and more ideas emerged and flourished to grow the plot.

As each handwritten chapter was completed, the digital chapter was typed no longer than a day later. The ideas are fresh, too much of life and its distractions have not happened in twenty-four hours or less, (fingers crossed) so there’s no fear that distractions will play havoc with the handwritten chapter, all that happens is a bit more spit and polish.

Am I converted?

I can’t quite be sure on that but I have stacked up on the journals that I feel comfortable writing in – the easily portable type, the ‘anywhere journal’ when inspiration strikes, even at 3 a.m.

How about you? Do you write from head to screen or are you a paper and pen person first?

Please share your thoughts in the message box below.

Happy Reading, Happy Writing.

Tell your remarkable story today to touch a life or many lives through storytelling.

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Writing Support

Often writers feel alone while tapping out the stories that come tumbling out of imaginative worlds with a benevolent muse guiding the next brainwave.

Writing starts out feeling like a lonely affair and the actual writing will always be a lone love affair with your writing tools – however, the number of support communities available to writers is phenomenal. Facebook groups with experienced authors and authorpreneurs abound.

You can choose to actively engage in these forums or lurk a while until you find the courage to ask a question or respond to someone’s question. There are local groups such as Writers Around Australia created by Lisa Braun and Tina Bonett who generously share posts and ideas. The New South Wales Writers’ Centre to keep up to date with advice and events. The Professional Association I find immeasurably beneficial is ALLi based in the UK, established by Orna Ross with a team of talented and experienced authors, with a worldwide membership.

The Platform for Building Authors and Authorpreneur Mastermind by the Winsome Media Group, established by Juliet Dillion Clark is inspirational and provides valuable advice on how to grow your author platform to get noticed to drive sales.

An excellent inspirational forum to enhance your speaking skills (as authors we are inclined to be introverts) and seek speaking opportunities to add another stream of income to your job as a writer, is Big Impact and Income Speakers under the helm of Amondarose Igoe. Here you will find inspiration and support to build confidence and grow your author business – both Winsome Media Group and Big Impact and Income Speakers are US based.

The SPF community established by author Mark Dawson is a great sharing and advice UK forum with worldwide membership. Women Writers Women’s Books is a supportive, informative network of authors created by Barbara Bos. BooksGoSocial Author’s Group run by four dedicated administrators offers advice to authors through sharing ideas and is great for marketing your books.

Following a range of podcasts and signing up for webinars allows authors to connect with developments in a rapidly changing publishing landscape.

I religiously follow The Creative Penn, ALLi and SPF Podcasts and select topics from a range of presenters on other forums as the need arises – quite often I might add! Smart Author podcasts with Mark Coker from Smashwords publishing platform offers solid advice for authors starting out. So you want to be a writer (Australia) with Valerie Khoo and Allison Tait covers a range of topics from local to global writing and publishing trends.

Digital publishing platforms that are providing excellent services to authors are Draft2Digital with a range of great features for new and established authors. Kobo offers distribution to Canada and the Netherlands. KDP is a prominent publishing platform from the dawn of eBook publishing. (2007) – the choice is vast, you eventually find your comfort zone and work with your chosen publishing platforms. Reedsy, UK based, provides a range of vetted services as does ALLi from editors, to cover designers and Reedsy provides an advanced formatting book service.

For POD, IngramSpark and CreateSpace/KDP provide excellent platforms to get your print book out into the world.

There are many more services and professional author bodies available, after trying them you eventually settle on your ‘favourites’ because you can’t possibly follow all. Being selective ensures you are not doubling up and eating into your writing time, the most crucial aspect of your writing career.

There’s an oasis of supportive networks out there, reach out and you’ll be amazed at the wealth of advice you will receive.

I hope you find the platforms I respect and trust beneficial for you on your writing journey.

Happy Writing!

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